Worth it 6/30/18
–for someone I know
On one cold wintry day
I was looking for hope
A place where I could grow
Where goodness I could sow
When I looked at your face
And the ones around me
Showed me amazing grace
I saw a gleam of hope
But then darkness took over
I hated everything you did
And what you were to me
Your light I couldn’t see
After that, the storm ended
All my pain, hurt, and hate
Melted away from me
Your light I could now see
For all you are to me
For all the good I see
And all the grace and love
I see and find in you
You are always worth it
Beautiful poem 🙂 Reading this makes me miss writing poetry
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Thank you, Niki. Maybe you should try writing poetry again!
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That was beautiful.
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Thank you, Terri.
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this is beautiful and accurate of a relationship!
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True. Thank you for your kind words, Tara.
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Such a thought-provoking poem! I love your writing style and how you convey emotions.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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This is a beautiful poem written with so many emotions. I’m sure so many can relate to these feelings…
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I think you’re right, Daisy. I have had a lot of interesting experiences with this person.
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Wow good one.
I like the chin of thoughts. Very well expressed.
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Thank you, Indrani.
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This poem made me picture someone that used to be in my life, exactly! Very thought provoking – you evoke a great sense of imagery with your words. Beautiful!
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Wow! That’s amazing, Madison! Thank you also for your kind words.
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This is a very powerful poem, I really enjoyed it.
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Thank you for your kind words. 🙂
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Very beautiful poem. I can feel all of the emotions of the love and the hate.
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Thank you, Luci! 🙂
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What beautiful and powerful words. It really paints a story.
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Thank you, Christie. This person and I really DO have a kind of a story.
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Wow this is a beautiful, passionate poem. I love the theme of hope in the mist of despair! No matter how dark things get, there is always a glimmer of hope.
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Yes, and that is what I learned from my experiences with this person!
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